Friday, June 21, 2013

[Writing Practice] Appearance

Topic: Can changing in appearance improve people's life? 


               It is human nature to judge people based on their appearance because beautiful things are believed to be good although it is not always the case. That’s why the majority of the population thinks that changing in appearance can help them to improve their life. In my opinion, it is not the beauty that affects their life but it is themselves that change themselves.
                People always have their first impression of someone based on one’s appearance for that it is the first thing they can see before they start to talk and investigate one’s personality. Although the impression can be changed sometime after that, it easily causes miserableness to the “ugly” portion of the society. For example, if comparing between a confident-looking or intelligent-looking candidate and a nerd-looking one, the boss will probably choose the previous one to become their employee. The later one comes home disappointedly, wondering why the company refused him or her.
                Thus, improving one’s appearance can definitely improve one’s life as they become more confident because the surrounding people change their way of thinking and therefore, treat them differently. The group work and relationship between them and the other improve significantly.        Hence, they feel that life has become easier to live and smile more. The stress is gone so now they can enjoy a facet of life that they never have the chance before. Their shyness slowly disappears and a new person forms. It is a change inside.

                People should use appearance as a tool to improve their life and not a standard to judge others because the beauty is just an illusion that will fade away with time. It is the inside that will last forever.  


Notes: 
  1. Try to be as academical as possible but my vocabulary seems to have vanished after one years unused. 
  2. Need to practice more and focus more on the topic. 
  3. Adding picture just for fun 

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